2023 Statement Readers

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@WhtsThFrequency I noticed you're off the list, but I'm also interested in an alternative pathway within vet med which is something you mentioned you could help with - do you have some time by any chance? 🙂
 
@sheltermed

I'm actually slogging through finishing my dissertation right now and getting ready to defend and then start the new gig, so it might be a while before I can really give it a good look, at least two weeks cause I need to focus hardcore....if you need a response quicker than that I might not be the best option but if you have the time I can still do it if you PM me.
 
@sheltermed

I'm actually slogging through finishing my dissertation right now and getting ready to defend and then start the new gig, so it might be a while before I can really give it a good look, at least two weeks cause I need to focus hardcore....if you need a response quicker than that I might not be the best option but if you have the time I can still do it if you PM me.

No worries, thank you for getting back to me! Best of luck!!
 
I'm stuck because I want to reuse my essays from last year (they were pretty fine-tuned and are still current on how I feel) but the character count has been extended, and I'm having a hard time expanding on my year-old ideas.
 
I'm stuck because I want to reuse my essays from last year (they were pretty fine-tuned and are still current on how I feel) but the character count has been extended, and I'm having a hard time expanding on my year-old ideas.
Have you tried just completely rewriting them with the same topics? And not trying to add words to the old essays?
(Also I assume in file reviews they said your essays were fine)
 
Have you tried just completely rewriting them with the same topics? And not trying to add words to the old essays?
(Also I assume in file reviews they said your essays were fine)
I wouldn't get it the same. I had excellent feedback the first time to get them to where they are. But yes, in file review they were well-liked.
 
I wouldn't get it the same. I had excellent feedback the first time to get them to where they are. But yes, in file review they were well-liked.
Well if you answer the questions and aren't insanely below the limit, I would stick with what you have. Can't see them punishing you for being under the limit as long as you answer the prompts.
 
Do we have any public health ppl in the house who can read mini essays? :thinking:
 
Anyone willing to read over a 2000 character personal statement for Davis? I think it’s done but would really like a new pair of eyes on it before I submit


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Is there a separate thread for the class of 2024? I'd like to help too 😀
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!

1) Click "quote" on the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN screen name, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address.
3) Delete the quote tags at both the top and the bottom.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:

Username | Vet student | focus on grammar/readability/content/etc | any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

that redhead - small animal/exotics GP. I’ll read it and let you know what I think :shrug:

Glammyre | c/o 2018, going into epidemiology research | Grammar and readability, but happy to soundboard on content. I'll respond faster to PMs than to thread notifications.

SportPonies | U of I c/o 2021 | Throw it all at me! I tend to be very nitpicky about grammar, but content is my real forte.

allygator13 | SGU/UTK c/o 2018, starting a rotating internship in June | I'm a grammar nazi so can help with that, but also will give general feedback and help with content where necessary 🙂

Ziggyandjazzy, Oregon State ‘22, I can help you with whatever. Fine tuning tiny grammar issues is not my forte as I grew up with a bilingual education. I can definitely help you with your “story” and getting across what you want to. I tend towards brutal honesty lol. (I can fix formatting on this post later, on my phone atm bc I am unfortunately having MacBook issues, again, sigh)

YoungKal • MI ST C/O 2022 • I can help with whatever. I’m not super good at grammar but I got really good at explaining experiences.

Elkhart | Former member of the c/o 2020 | I'd say that my greatest strengths lie in nitpicking grammar and other general mechanics such as flow and word choice/variability. Truthfully, I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader moreso than as a starting point.

mmmdreamerz | c/o 2021 | I can definitely help with grammar but my favorite thing is to help make the writing “flow.” Happy to help with anything really. I’ll be honest, but I’ll be nice about it haha.

AFutureDogtor | C/O 2022 | I'm super great with grammar and the technical aspects of writing. I'm also willing to help you put together your story/make your writing flow, but I'm not great at putting things together from the very, very beginning, so please come to me with something already written. Feel free to ask me questions beyond just those for your statement! 🙂 Good luck!

RedLauren| C/O 2022 | I can help you with making sure that what you write will highlight what makes you unique and what you as an individual will contribute to your class and to veterinary medicine. I think it is important to show the admissions committee that you are not just one of many in the sea of applicants - so make yourself stand out! I will help you avoid cliches, and highlight your strengths. I'm also good at checking grammar and the continuity of your writing.

genny | small animal GP | I am good at making wordy writing more concise. I did an explanation statement with my application in 2012, so I can give feedback on those too. I was a non-trad student.

MD PhD| MD PhD c/o 2021 | Name says it all. Long time lurker. Would love to give back to the SDN community as it helped me a lot during my application process (especially the school specific threads.) Can check for grammar and flow.

MSUcvmHOPE | Michigan State cvm c/o 2023 | focus mostly on making sure you answer the prompt, cleanliness of wording, and grammar | reporting for duty!

Edited cause I forgot to remove the quote...
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!

1) Click "quote" on the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN screen name, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address.
3) Delete the quote tags at both the top and the bottom.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:

Username | Vet student | focus on grammar/readability/content/etc | any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

that redhead - small animal/exotics GP. I’ll read it and let you know what I think :shrug:

Glammyre | c/o 2018, going into epidemiology research | Grammar and readability, but happy to soundboard on content. I'll respond faster to PMs than to thread notifications.

SportPonies | U of I c/o 2021 | Throw it all at me! I tend to be very nitpicky about grammar, but content is my real forte.

allygator13 | SGU/UTK c/o 2018, starting a rotating internship in June | I'm a grammar nazi so can help with that, but also will give general feedback and help with content where necessary 🙂

Ziggyandjazzy, Oregon State ‘22, I can help you with whatever. Fine tuning tiny grammar issues is not my forte as I grew up with a bilingual education. I can definitely help you with your “story” and getting across what you want to. I tend towards brutal honesty lol. (I can fix formatting on this post later, on my phone atm bc I am unfortunately having MacBook issues, again, sigh)

YoungKal • MI ST C/O 2022 • I can help with whatever. I’m not super good at grammar but I got really good at explaining experiences.

Elkhart | Former member of the c/o 2020 | I'd say that my greatest strengths lie in nitpicking grammar and other general mechanics such as flow and word choice/variability. Truthfully, I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader moreso than as a starting point.

mmmdreamerz | c/o 2021 | I can definitely help with grammar but my favorite thing is to help make the writing “flow.” Happy to help with anything really. I’ll be honest, but I’ll be nice about it haha.

AFutureDogtor | C/O 2022 | I'm super great with grammar and the technical aspects of writing. I'm also willing to help you put together your story/make your writing flow, but I'm not great at putting things together from the very, very beginning, so please come to me with something already written. Feel free to ask me questions beyond just those for your statement! 🙂 Good luck!

RedLauren| C/O 2022 | I can help you with making sure that what you write will highlight what makes you unique and what you as an individual will contribute to your class and to veterinary medicine. I think it is important to show the admissions committee that you are not just one of many in the sea of applicants - so make yourself stand out! I will help you avoid cliches, and highlight your strengths. I'm also good at checking grammar and the continuity of your writing.

genny | small animal GP | I am good at making wordy writing more concise. I did an explanation statement with my application in 2012, so I can give feedback on those too. I was a non-trad student.

MD PhD| MD PhD c/o 2021 | Name says it all. Long time lurker. Would love to give back to the SDN community as it helped me a lot during my application process (especially the school specific threads.) Can check for grammar and flow.

MSUcvmHOPE | Michigan State cvm c/o 2023 | focus mostly on making sure you answer the prompt, cleanliness of wording, and grammar | reporting for duty!

Edited cause I forgot to remove the quote...
Ps we haven’t made a new thread yet for this cycles co 2024 applicants 😉

Not yet. We normally don't make one until applications open later this year that way the thread is relavent and doesn't get lost in the abyss
 
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