2025 Personal Statement Readers!

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Since VMCAS opened back in January for this current cycle, that means there's much more time available for applicants to have their essays read/reviewed/edited than in previous years. Much more time to polish things up and make them as perfect as possible. 🙂

To applicants: You can send a PM regarding your essays to any of the members on the Current Readers list! Just the click the mail icon next to your username on the top right navigation bar/menu, and select "Start a new conversation". Then, type the username(s) of the reader(s) who you'd like to utilize in the Recipients box.

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To readers:

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2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).
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To readers:

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.
 
To readers:

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.
 
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To readers:

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.
 
I would just like to thank everyone who is offering up their time to read personal statements! I am applying this cycle and I am extremely nervous not with applying but trying to find feedback with personal statements. I am nervous to ask people who are close to me to read my personal statements because not only am I horrible at writing essays, but I am scared of any judgment that could happen. Even though I might not get in, this website is truly GODSEND and every person here is supportive and helpful!
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!
 
HeelerMom said:
Those applying next cycle would be class of 2025 ☺
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Elkhart said:
She knows; she’s a third year student and time just flies by so, so fast while you’re in vet school.

I had the same expression of disbelief with this last cycle being for the c/o 2024... by the time that that class enters vet school this year, I would have graduated with a DVM. Craziness.
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time fies SO FAST and also not at all!!! Vet school is this weird paradox that most scientists cannot explain.
 
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2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.
 
I’m thankful there are many out there willing to read my essays as I feel they may have been the reason I was rejected this past cycle. I especially look forward to getting in contact with @sheltermed and @finnickthedog because MSU is still my top choice!!
 
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1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.
 
As a Class of 2025 applicant, I want to give a huge THANK YOU to proof readers for this cycle for taking your time to help us hopefuls! I look forward to reaching out to a few of you to assist with my essays, in the coming weeks! 🙂
 
I know it's still quite early in the cycle, but I just wanted to give this thread a little bump to remind any new people of this resource 🙂
 
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2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too
 
DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.
 
This is such a great resource, what an awesome little community here. I unfortunately don't think I am much help as writing is not my strong point - however I might be looking for something similar when it comes to writing my new personal statement for residency application/match. So I might reach out and see if anyone might be able to help one I start putting that together for this year!
 
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2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS
Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!
 
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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | c/o 2024 | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!
 
I have nothing to do today and tomorrow so I wanted to solicit more essays by bumping this thread and also updating my entry 🙂 -- having a lot of fun working on these with you guys!


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | DVM/PhD c/o idk | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well. Seemingly good at cutting essays down to that 2000 characters.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!
 
Hi Sheltermed! I’m at the early stage of getting my essays together. It’s been a rough spring. I had emergency surgery and now lined up for another surgery in a couple weeks. I’m going to message you right now, so that I can stay in touch, and hopefully you can help me out. You are all amazing for helping us 2025 hopefuls!

sheltermed said:
I have nothing to do today and tomorrow so I wanted to solicit more essays by bumping this thread and also updating my entry 🙂 -- having a lot of fun working on these with you guys!


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | DVM/PhD c/o idk | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well. Seemingly good at cutting essays down to that 2000 characters.

JJ Bittenbinder | Will be c/o 2024 | Happy to help with any part of the writing process (brainstorming, content, grammar, etc.) I was a writing tutor in undergrad and I would love to assist anyone who needs help!!

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!
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I’m a bit behind on the essays sent to me recently so I’m gonna take my name off the list. Once I get through those I may be back!


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | DVM/PhD c/o idk | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well. Seemingly good at cutting essays down to that 2000 characters.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!
 
I have a fairly large backlog of essays that I have to get to (thank you for trusting me with these!!) so I'm taking myself off the list until I catch up.


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!
 
Adding myself to this as my summer became way less exciting and busy than I had planned

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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

sheltermed | DVM/PhD c/o idk | Mainly interested in helping with content; putting a unique spin on your experiences to paint a vivid picture of you as a person. Likely best as a first stop for ideas and not necessarily a final proofread. However, able to help with grammar as well. Seemingly good at cutting essays down to that 2000 characters.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!
 
mcatz22 said:
Adding myself to this as my summer became way less exciting and busy than I had planned
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it looks like you accidentally posted an older version - this is the most up to date list as of 6/29 including your addition:


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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!
 
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Elkhart | Former vet student (would have been c/o 2020) | I can help out with pretty much anything, but am most proficient in the nitty-gritty mechanics of writing: spelling, grammar, basic flow, sentence structure, etc. I'm probably best utilized as a final proofreader, though I'm also willing to provide pointers on how to trim the fat in your statement so that it doesn't exceed the VMCAS character limits (which is more difficult than it sounds!).

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.
 
Removing myself from the list. Work has been ridiculously crazy with COVID-19 things and I just... flat-out don’t have the time or energy to do this right now. Maybe once/if things settle down, but I have doubts that that will happen before the end of the application period. Sorry.

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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I suddenly find myself with more free time than usual...I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.
 
I'm not removing myself from the list (yet), just including a turnaround time statement 🙂

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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.
 
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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
I'm just adding a statement of my preferences in helping people workshop their writing.
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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

Vet2022-20224| c/o 2023| I'd love to help bring out your uniqueness and what you can offer the profession. I can help with general flow and grammar too. Final proof reading is not my strength, but I can try my best to help at all stages of your writing. I helped quite a handful of people last year as well!

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
I am removing myself, but I will continue to help those I've been working with. Good luck guys! 🙂

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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Hello! Is anyone still accepting essays to edit? Please let me know, thanks!
 
HerkeyCarmella said:
Hello! Is anyone still accepting essays to edit? Please let me know, thanks!
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If you want a reader for your essays, you can message any of the people on the list below!


Vet2022-20224 said:
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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

PrincessButterCup | grad school c/o who knows | I have my BA in English and I do a lot of science writing and editing. I can read for grammar and content, and I can give either comprehensive or brief notes, depending on your preference. Please give me at least a week to reply with comments.

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
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I'm going to disappear from this list until I'm caught up on the essays I have in queue. 🙂

(If I've given you comments before and you want me to read a new draft, just let me know! I'm always available to read over the edits you've made, even if I'm not listed here anymore.)




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EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

finnickthedog | c/o 2021 | Can help at any stage of the process, just let me know what you'd like me to focus on. My responses may be slow since I'm on clinics, but I expect I'll at least have time most weekends to look over an essay or two. If I get too busy, I'll take my name off.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Removing myself from the list since I have less time now. If you've already sent me your statement I am still planning to get back to you and you are also free to send me updated drafts for fresh feedback. Just don't have the time to take new people.




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4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

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Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

WildZoo | c/o 2020 | I have a degree in writing and have helped many applicants with their personal statements in prior years. I also participated as an interviewer this past application cycle for my school, so have some perspective from the other side of the table on how these essays are received. Happy to help at any stage in the writing process, as well as through multiple revisions. Turnaround time is currently 4-5 weeks.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Removing myself from the list! If you have already sent me drafts you are on my schedule and will be receiving feedback from me over the course of this month. I am happy to review updates as well. Just won't have time for more completely new ones before the VMCAS deadline.




DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
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2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

WonderingStudent | c/o 2024 | My default is grammar focus but if you need anything else (content, brainstorming, etc) let me know!

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
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It would be a big help if anyone can proofread the essays I already have written and help me brainstorm ideas for my personal statements that are just for UPenn. This is a great thread and any help would be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance! 🙂
 
Taking myself off the list for right now because I currently don’t have electricity at my house after Hurricane Isaias. I’m still going to read the essays I’ve already been sent but have limited access to power and internet.

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

that redhead | c/o 2015, small animal and exotics GP | I’ll read your statement and give you feedback.

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Also taking myself off the list. If you have sent me yours already, I will still reply. Just not taking new ones right now 🙂

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

blueheeler | c/o 2024 | More than happy to help you at any stage of the writing process! Willing to help with the TMDSAS essays.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Taking myself off the list. Orientation starts tomorrow followed by school on Monday, 😱

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

Lisagk | c/o 2024 | Happy to help with narrative flow, organization/structure, focusing on the main ideas and cutting out unnecessary fluff. Happy to help with and talk about any part of the application process too. I prefer to workshop papers in real time (via voice or video) - It'll make things a lot faster for you and me both. Back and forth sending of drafts takes me much longer than going things through with you in real time. (If you can't video/voice chat, I will still look at your writing, but please understand it will take longer to communicate back and forth)

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Also taking myself off the list. Term starts in a couple of weeks and I need to finish the ones I already still have to do before classes start. Good luck C/O 2025 applicants 🙂

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

mcatz22 | c/o 2024 | I can help with content overall, flow, and making your personal story stand out against the others!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
 
Also removing myself as classes are starting up. If we are already in correspondence, I will still read and get back to you!

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

Monty0526 | c/o 2024 | I am happy to help with any stage in the writing process but will be most helpful with narrative flow and helping you cut off unnecessary fluff.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
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Also removing myself as classes have started. If we are already in correspondence, I will still read and get back to you!

DO NOT ERASE THESE INSTRUCTIONS!
1) Quote the most recent post.
2) Add your SDN username, your credentials, and specific things you are willing to edit for (content only, grammar only, etc) under the "current readers" section. DO NOT post your email address or any other identifying and/or public information.
3) Remove the quote tags.
4) If you are unable to read any more personal statements, please come back and remove your name from the list.

Example:
Username | Vet student/Pre-vet/Veterinarian/whatever | Focus on grammar/readability/content, etc. | Any other pertinent info


CURRENT READERS

EngrSC | Soon to be vet student (c/o 2024) | I can help with the explanation statement, both content and grammar.

elephants&cows | c/o 2024 | my strength is concise writing + using the active voice

ijustwanttobeavet| c/o 2024 | I’m willing to help with content and grammar. Also here to answer any questions about the process in general!

marilee | c/o 2024 | Telling compelling stories and focusing your narrative.

cbucks | c/o 2023 | I can help with any stage, but I'll probably be most helpful with figuring out the overall flow or thinking of ideas to talk about in your essays!

Scs589 - vet student - I can help with anything needed! I focus mainly on flow, and making sure that you are conveying what you want to! I thrive on helping people on applications and hearing their stories!
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