Anybody willing to look over my secondary responses?

[djsbaseball2014]

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Hi all,

I just want some help in regards to grammar and overall flow. Please let me know if anybody would be willing to read some of my essay! I will PM them to you

 

[Catalystik]

Hi all,

I just want some help in regards to grammar and overall flow. Please let me know if anybody would be willing to read some of my essay! I will PM them to you

Here is someone willing to help: .
Anyone need secondary edits?