Anyone care to read/advise on my Explanation Statement?

[Armymutt25A]

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So I've written my explanation statement. Looking for some feedback on it. Any takers? I'll PM it. This one isn't going public unless I get accepted.

 

[Willowhand]

I'd be happy to, if you like. Just PM it and let me know if there is anything specific you'd like feedback on.

 

[VeganSoprano]

Sure, I'm happy to help if I can.

 

[moosenanny]

I'd be happy to provide feedback as well, although my general philosophy is to provide as few details as possible. As long as you know before you PM me . . . 🙂

 

[Maschka1]

I would be happy to look it over. I figure when I get mine to the point I like it, I am hoping I will find someone kind enough to give mine a looksy. So feel free ti PM me 🙂 BTW I am not really the expert at grammar and spelling but I am pretty good at being critical about content and flow. Let me know if I can help 😀

 

[HopefulAg]

I'd be willing to revise it if you're still looking for folks.

 

[EnvyPointers]

If you're still looking for people, I can look at it also!

 

[Wolphcats]

I too will proof your PS. I am not amazing at grammar, but I am great at critical analysis.

 

[nyanko]

Guys it's an explanation statement, not a PS. Just so you are all aware...