Attention to all those that would have been journalists/editors in another life!

[alsaire]

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Just kidding, I'm not trying to limit the readers to those that have journalistic tendencies!

But I do have a humble request that I hope someone would be able to satisfy.

I know I'm applying horrendously late, but would somebody take a quick look at my personal statement for post-bac schools and provide feedback/criticism? The personal statement is currently geared toward EVMS, but that is mostly the last paragraph, and can be re-tooled for other schools. Essentially, I am hoping this personal statement will be the blueprint for other schools.

If anybody is interested in reading my personal statement, just send me a message or post below. I hope at least somebody's interested... 🙁

 

[johnnyscans]

Just kidding, I'm not trying to limit the readers to those that have journalistic tendencies!

But I do have a humble request that I hope someone would be able to satisfy.

I know I'm applying horrendously late, but would somebody take a quick look at my personal statement for post-bac schools and provide feedback/criticism? The personal statement is currently geared toward EVMS, but that is mostly the last paragraph, and can be re-tooled for other schools. Essentially, I am hoping this personal statement will be the blueprint for other schools.

If anybody is interested in reading my personal statement, just send me a message or post below. I hope at least somebody's interested... 🙁

I'll take a look at it. I'm no expert when it comes to personal statements, but I've helped with hiring in the past, so I have some experience reading cover letters.

 

[alsaire]

Thanks for all the people that agreed to read my personal statement. After some thought with the person that I've discussed this with, I'm going to do a re-write of the personal statement and have it finished hopefully by tomorrow. I'll send it out to you guys when I'm done 🙂.

If anybody else would also like to critique/comment on my personal statement tomorrow, you're totally welcome to! Just leave me a personal message or a comment in this thread.

Edit: I've finished! You guys know you want to critique my statement 😛. Don't be shy!