Can anyone please read my personal statement for SMP programs?

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Hi everyone!

So I need help. I Need someone who would be willing to look at and edit my personal statement for SMP programs. Any feedback at all is welcome.
 
1, Wrong forum, there are PS readers in the premed section.
2. I can read it sometime this weekend.