Can somebody read my PS? Navy Corpsman to MD

[DocMaur]

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Hello all!
Looking for some feedback on my PS.
I have had several people read it, but I feel as if they dont really understand how a AAMC PS is supposed to be.
I've received positive feedback, as well as feedback that may not pertain to a med school app.
Anyway, I would just like feedback about the content. (Im sure there are several grammatical errors that i will get fixed at my schools writing center)
Thanks!!!!!!
P.S. Be as harsh as you need to be, or send a message if it is better that way.

 

[NotASerialKiller]

Definitely take that file down ASAP, you don't want that up for anyone to download for a ton of reasons. People will volunteer to help you and you can PM them.

 

[DocMaur]

Definitely take that file down ASAP, you don't want that up for anyone to download for a ton of reasons. People will volunteer to help you and you can PM them.

You mean to tell me the world is not full of trusting people?? 😱
But seriously, thanks!
Im new here, so rookie mistake haha

 

[ofthesaints]

Yeah, OP. Take it down. I'll send you a PM and point out some grammatical errors and my overall impression.

 

[Oh_Gee]

Hello all!
Looking for some feedback on my PS.
I have had several people read it, but I feel as if they dont really understand how a AAMC PS is supposed to be.
I've received positive feedback, as well as feedback that may not pertain to a med school app.
Anyway, I would just like feedback about the content. (Im sure there are several grammatical errors that i will get fixed at my schools writing center)
Thanks!!!!!!
P.S. Be as harsh as you need to be, or send a message if it is better that way.

i'd be interested in helping

 

[DocMaur]

I also should have mentioned that I am willing to read anyones as well.