Could anyone give me advice on my institutional action essay?

[appl2023]

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[LizzyM]

"had drank" is a weird form of the verb "drink". Use "drank" (I drank alcohol) or "had consumed" or just "consumed". If you are concerned with keystrokes, "I drank" is the shortest of the options.

Other than that, I think that your essay is very reasonable and well done.

 

[appl2023]

Thank you for the feedback!!