Could someone please read my supplement essay answers?

[KoonS]

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Hello guys,
could someone take a look at my essay see if my grammar are okay?
My grammar is really bad because english is my 3rd languages.
Please me let know if you are willing to help,
Thank you.

 

[Incis0r]

I have some time on my hands. I've worked as an editor for numerous publications so I could help you out if you wanted.

Full disclosure, however: I am a pre-dental student and am applying in the current cycle.