Diversity Essay - Secondaries

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Her birth made me develop a sense of maturity in that it forced me to become a role model, which helped me develop better leadership skills.

but like why tho
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I think number two sounds the strongest. Or number three. For reasons you mentioned, I would not go with number one.
2 and 3 sound most interesting to me. possible to combine
I'd suggest combining 1 and 2. Your number 3 is too common without more elaboration, many people have siblings and can speak to their influence on their life or character. A diverse experience with a sibling could include: living with a sibling that has challenging disabilities, sibling with destructive behavior (gambling, alcohol), etc.