I can appreciate the argument you are trying to make as many people agree with you. However, here are some of the reasons I did not find your essay convincing.
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jgl1980 said:
Let me fist state that I believe that IQ tests are really stupid.
1.) Interesting opening. Definitely lets your audience know where you stand, but is it the most effective way of starting a persuasive piece?
jgl1980 said:
And for you all that think I am saying this because I scored low, well you are wrong! I have taken many of these "intelligence" tests and there is absolutely no way it can tell you someones mental capacity.
2.) Which tests have you taken and what were your scores? How many is "many"?
jgl1980 said:
The whole idea of an IQ is absurd and if you don't believe me do a little research on the history of IQ then make your own judgment.
3.) Please cite the studies you are referring to. It makes your argument stronger and is helpful to your readers.
jgl1980 said:
To date scientists cannot formulate one common definition for intelligence.
4.) According to Wikipedia, an online encyclopedia, psychologists have indeed come up with many definitions of IQ, which were blended into the current understanding of it as listed here :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IQ
jgl1980 said:
Well lets look at this; today the medical profession is a business.
5.) "According to historians, the term business referred to activities or interests. By extension the word became (as recently as the 18th century) synonymous with an individual commercial enterprise. It has also taken on the more general meaning of a nexus of commercial activities."
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business Thus, it is not the profession that makes it a business, it is the people who pay for those goods and services.
jgl1980 said:
In a business you have to satisfy the customer, the patient.
6.) Good point.
jgl1980 said:
The "smart" doc is not caring so he would not provide the patient with a pleasurable experience but cures the patient.
7.) No one said smartness rules out concern. And it seems unlikely that a patient is going to have a pleasurable experience in the hospital.
jgl1980 said:
The patient is happy with the results but hated the experience he/she had and decides for his/her next life threatening illness that he/she will take their business elsewhere.
8.) I have nothing to substantiate this, but I imagine a patient with a life-threatening illness who is cured will like the doctor no matter his/her personality. Being sick really endears one to those who provide relief.
jgl1980 said:
The doc is a good doc but goes hungry, can support his family and gets everything taken away because he could not pay back his loans. So he is not a very successful doc. So you do need some level of sensitivity.
9.) LOL> this part is obviously in jest. But even still, you make a number of assumptions. You assume a limited supply of severely ill people. There is a continual influx of injured/dying people. You also assume the doctor treats the same people over and over. The doctor does not need to maintain relationships with the patient (this is arguable depending upon his/her specialty) since, as the patient was cured of the first affliction, it is impossible for the patient to have the same problem again (by definition of being cured). This means that the patient will go see another specialist anyway. It is also notable that even if the patient is unhappy with the doc's personality, the doctor collects his fee and does not need to worry about malpractice suits since he/she did the job perfectly. Given that he/she gets paid no matter what, he/she will not go hungry from that alone (he/she might if his/her expenses outweigh his/her income). You also assume that the doctor's only source of revenue is from salary. Perhaps the doctor diversified into mutual funds or real estate. Maybe even antiques or art. Thus it cannot be known if he/she will not be able to pay back the student loans (this rests on another assumption that the doctor was not MSTP or an excellent student at a state school or a talented URM, all of whom got full rides). So he/she will still be considered successful, and sensitivity is proven to be superfluous in putting food on the table.
But...do I agree with you? Yes. Sensitivity is extremely important.
But intelligence is better. 👍 