Does anyone have about 10 minutes to read a PS (b4 I send out final copy)

[basupran]

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First, thanks to the following members for helping me with my previous versions:
ATPase, idq1i, phenolphthalein, MDTom, SistaKaren, woolie (in alphabetical order).

I incorporated all of their suggestions into my final draft, and was wondering if anyone would be willing to look at it.
You can either email me: [email protected], or PM me...
Thanks!

 

[DieselPetrolGrl]

i lack experince ( have only begun drafting mine) but i can read it for clarity/grammer. just pm it to me...besides u have supra in your sn

 

[basupran]

Originally posted by DieselPetrolGrl
i lack experince ( have only begun drafting mine) but i can read it for clarity/grammer. just pm it to me...besides u have supra in your sn

Actually, basupran is a mix of my last name, toyota supra, and my first name...Yes, I am obsessed with Supras, and will name my firstborn Toyota, second born Supra, thirdborn Turbo....

I am PMing you with a copy of my PS, thanks.

What does dieselpetrolgrl mean?

 

[DieselPetrolGrl]

nice names..wait ur going to have kids?
why dont u just have cars and name them..heres my list:
1)lil'Vanquish
2)SecondSonSupra
3)XJjr
4)bornAt540
5)MummysMseries
6)NFSprsh911unlshd
7)AmgSweetSL

 

[dEEpEyEs]

Basupran you can PM me as well...I've been reading quite a few lately...and can try to help you out.

Regards,
DE

 

[anxiousone]

hello, if you want to pm me your essay, i can take a look at it as well. after writing about 30 essays ALREADY, i think i can do a decent job on it 😀

 

[basupran]

Originally posted by DieselPetrolGrl
nice names..wait ur going to have kids?

have cars instead of kids!! I have tried, but my Supra is not fertile.

I like the names of your cars!

 

[basupran]

anxiousone, dEEpEyEs
Thank you for your offers. I have sent you my PS, in your PM box.


All of you guys are awesome, so willing to help!

 

[cather]

I would be willing to read your essay too and help with anything.

 

[anxiousone]

i tried sending you the ps back with corrections, but your mailbox is full...

 

[basupran]

Originally posted by anxiousone
i tried sending you the ps back with corrections, but your mailbox is full...

Yeah, I just cleared it out. Thanks for pointing that out.