Help with adversity/challenge topics (brainstorming)

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Namingishard

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Hi everyone. I am pre-writing my secondaries and basically doing some brainstorming, but I'm having some hard times coming up with adversity/challenge topics worth writing ... I do have two in mind but also have concerns on them, so I'd love to hear what you say about these and if you have any tips on how to think about good topics to talk about, that'd be really appreciated!

Challenge: In my junior year I burned out cuz I found the mcat was way more grinding than i thought, my research faced a lot of setbacks, many of my other extracurricular commitments were adding to my stress, and I got into some conflicts with my closest friends. I had a really difficult time and cried nights on end. Through reflections, I realized that I had to take a step back and allow myself to breathe rather than blindly working hard all the time. Lesson: the path of becoming an MD will be hard but I need to take care of myself and balance work and life. I feel like it would be a lame story but I'm struggling to think of other challenge topics 🙁

Adversity: I was choked by an intoxicated patient when I was on my EMT shift, which ended up involved in a year-long criminal case as a victim and a witness. I had to balance coursework, court hearings, police interviews, and extracurricular work, and i have to navigate those complex legal terminology as an ESL. But I've already put the brief version of the story in the other impactful experiences, would it be redundant if I talk about it more in-depth?

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My two cents, in no particular order:
  • Make sure to read the prompt carefully and answer the call of the question (I understand that you are pre-writing and brainstorming now--a good idea--but do not attempt to use pre-written materials unless they address the prompt).
  • Show what you learned and how you grew as a result of the hardship. What is your character arc?
  • Avoid facile conclusions. Show that you are thinking deeply about issues that matter to the medical community. I hate it when someone says they shadowed a doctor, witnessed her listen to the patient, and then purports to have had a life-altering epiphany ("It was at that moment that I understood that medicine is more than pure science." Ugh.)
I am sure there is a more to be considered, but if you get these right, you'll be ahead of the game.
 
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Challenge: In my junior year I burned out cuz I found the mcat was way more grinding than i thought, my research faced a lot of setbacks, many of my other extracurricular commitments were adding to my stress, and I got into some conflicts with my closest friends. I had a really difficult time and cried nights on end. Through reflections, I realized that I had to take a step back and allow myself to breathe rather than blindly working hard all the time. Lesson: the path of becoming an MD will be hard but I need to take care of myself and balance work and life. I feel like it would be a lame story but I'm struggling to think of other challenge topics 🙁

What's the challenge? It just sounds like life went sour on you for a while. This conclusion doesn't reveal anything deep about you or how you address challenges. I gave you some articles to read, but you should also look at


Adversity: I was choked by an intoxicated patient when I was on my EMT shift, which ended up involved in a year-long criminal case as a victim and a witness. I had to balance coursework, court hearings, police interviews, and extracurricular work, and i have to navigate those complex legal terminology as an ESL. But I've already put the brief version of the story in the other impactful experiences, would it be redundant if I talk about it more in-depth?

That's not what I would consider "adversity." Read


I agree, what are the specific prompts you are addressing?
 
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What's the challenge? It just sounds like life went sour on you for a while. This conclusion doesn't reveal anything deep about you or how you address challenges. I gave you some articles to read, but you should also look at




That's not what I would consider "adversity." Read


I agree, what are the specific prompts you are addressing?
Thanks for your resources! I'm just trying to pre-write a general version for the adversity/challenge essay or simply start brainstorming some potential ideas that I can talk about so not any specific prompt to write.
 
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