I have at least one other person read each secondary essay I write. The larger ones i have numerous people read. That said, my partner who i live with is a journalist, so that definitely helps. But i gotta say, i am so tired of writing about myself and regurgitating the same information. And anyone who knows me knows that i never tire of talking about myself. I actually get excited when i see a fun secondary prompt beyond the standard, how are you diverse, why do you want to come here etc