IonClaws Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined May 3, 2011 Messages 480 Reaction score 338 May 5, 2011 #1 Members don't see this ad. I'll PM anyone who is kindly willing to review it; I'd like some feedback, ways to improve, etc.
Members don't see this ad. I'll PM anyone who is kindly willing to review it; I'd like some feedback, ways to improve, etc.
K kcola Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined Oct 8, 2010 Messages 80 Reaction score 0 May 5, 2011 #2 i was not an Eng major nor did I write much in college, but I can give it a try.
M MetabolismASE Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined Feb 19, 2011 Messages 178 Reaction score 20 May 5, 2011 #3 Not an English major but I can let you know what I think.
S SUGrad09 Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined May 19, 2010 Messages 74 Reaction score 0 May 6, 2011 #4 If you still need feedback I can look it over as well. 🙂