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Starting paragraph, Take Two:
I slowly crept toward a gloomy room near the end of the hallway. For a brief moment, the thought that the room might contain ghosts flashed through my mind, the action potentials dazzling along the my youthful axons. I quickly remembered, however, that my parents assure me many times ghosts only existed in myths. Nevertheless, my ventricles and atria accelerated, my legs felt stiff, and adrenaline rushed into my bloodstream. I paused and checked behind me to make sure the hallway was still empty. Taking a deep breath and holding it, I hesitated about whether to cross the threshold, until curiosity finally took over and urged me to step into the room.
I lived in...........
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I slowly crept toward a gloomy room near the end of the hallway. For a brief moment, the thought that the room might contain ghosts flashed through my mind, the action potentials dazzling along the my youthful axons. I quickly remembered, however, that my parents assure me many times ghosts only existed in myths. Nevertheless, my ventricles and atria accelerated, my legs felt stiff, and adrenaline rushed into my bloodstream. I paused and checked behind me to make sure the hallway was still empty. Taking a deep breath and holding it, I hesitated about whether to cross the threshold, until curiosity finally took over and urged me to step into the room.
I lived in...........
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