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First off, I am writing one PS for DO and MD schools.
I need a little help. I am working on my PS and I am not sure what warrants qualifying material. Here is a breakdown of what I have now:
Intro (need an attention getter, but telling that my journey is long)
Telling about my beginning college experiences and previous career and what I pursued and why.
Why I changed my mind and why I have so many credits.
My interest in science with addressing my biggest weakness.
Iffy paragraph talking about working 2 jobs while attending school full time and why.
Shadowing Experience with a pediatrician indicating an interest in primary care.
That's what I have now. I am sitting at about 4300 characters. It needs much work, but I am questioning what I should include. Some things I am not sure about:
Working as a patient transporter: great clinical experience, not great for portraying "why medicine."
Volunteering at my daughters school. More of a "throw it in there" thing.
Maybe talking about my time driving a semi over the road and seeing the need for health education to truckers.
Any help from anyone? Are there some things I should cut out? Are there some things I should really focus on for importance? Things that really set me apart. That is the general flow now, so is there anything I should move? Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it. If anyone is willing to read it as well, awesome. No need to post if you will, i can track down the "PS readers" threads.
I need a little help. I am working on my PS and I am not sure what warrants qualifying material. Here is a breakdown of what I have now:
Intro (need an attention getter, but telling that my journey is long)
Telling about my beginning college experiences and previous career and what I pursued and why.
Why I changed my mind and why I have so many credits.
My interest in science with addressing my biggest weakness.
Iffy paragraph talking about working 2 jobs while attending school full time and why.
Shadowing Experience with a pediatrician indicating an interest in primary care.
That's what I have now. I am sitting at about 4300 characters. It needs much work, but I am questioning what I should include. Some things I am not sure about:
Working as a patient transporter: great clinical experience, not great for portraying "why medicine."
Volunteering at my daughters school. More of a "throw it in there" thing.
Maybe talking about my time driving a semi over the road and seeing the need for health education to truckers.
Any help from anyone? Are there some things I should cut out? Are there some things I should really focus on for importance? Things that really set me apart. That is the general flow now, so is there anything I should move? Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it. If anyone is willing to read it as well, awesome. No need to post if you will, i can track down the "PS readers" threads.