Personal Statement Feedback

[anhnen5]

Hello everyone!

Any readers interested in critiquing a Personal Statement? It's still a work in progress but I just wanted to make sure I was going in the right direction. Mainly looking for content/story advice and critiques, but of course grammar/flow if anything is glaringly bad.

Thank you for your time!

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[lovehate]

Pm it.

 

[FlavivirusProtease]

PM me it

 

[Riceislife]

PM me if you still want feedback

 

[bobbyjoey]

PM it if you still want some feedback

 

[Mr. Babe]

Ditto, PM

 

[JBDoctor35]

PM! I'd be happy to read.

 

[anhnen5]

PM! I'd be happy to read.

Won't let me PM you for some reason!


Also thank you for the feedback so far everyone! I'm going to take everyone's comments/critiques and compile them before making any changes!

 

[LoveBeingHuman:)]

You can PM me!

 

[ssmd22]

You can PM me if you still need help!

 

[Jennawitz]

I'll read it!

 

[892002]

If you want more help, PM me

 

[Starly95]

Hey guys,
I would really like someone to proofread my personal statement as well and help me edit it. I just have so much to say that not sure which is more important. Any type of feedback is appreciated!
Thanks and sorry for interrupting the thread.....

 

[Chlorophyll Oracle]

Hello everyone!

Any readers interested in critiquing a Personal Statement? It's still a work in progress but I just wanted to make sure I was going in the right direction. Mainly looking for content/story advice and critiques, but of course grammar/flow if anything is glaringly bad.

Thank you for your time!

I'd love to read it!

 

[Chlorophyll Oracle]

Hi there,

Would anyone here still be willing to read over a PS?

Thanks so much

I’d be more than happy to read it!

 

[sachin123]

Hi guys, I am reapplying this cycle. Would anyone care to read my personal statement?

 

[Jennawitz]

I'd be happy to read if you haven't yet submitted!