critique

Hi everyone, I have begun working on my personal statement and I am seeking to apply this cycle. I was hoping if anyone could take a look at my personal statement and give me some good critique. I am guilty of losing my structure and overall theme when I'm writing and I think i need outside...

NOTE: THIS IS FOR PRE-DENTS! Pre-med students, we will not be able to help you out much! Refer here for your list! Inspired by Pre-Allo's List Link to last year's thread Hey guys! Happy early Easter :happy: Seeing as the next cycle is just about two months away, and how there have been posts...

Hello all! I was wondering if anyone would be willing to edit my personal statement. I have had it edited once or twice, however I’d love a completely objective view if possible! Let me know if anyone would be able to lend me some help in the start of this long journey haha and Thank You all in...

Hello everyone! Any readers interested in critiquing a Personal Statement? It's still a work in progress but I just wanted to make sure I was going in the right direction. Mainly looking for content/story advice and critiques, but of course grammar/flow if anything is glaringly bad. Thank you...

Hey guys! I just finished up my very first draft of my personal statement. It's ROUGH, but I would like some feedback to see if I'm even heading in the right-ish direction in terms of content. I'm planning on showing this to my premed advisor this week, so the quicker I can get some other eyes...

Hi everyone! I'm a freshman in college that has had some research experience in the past and need some help with my REU and other MD/PhD summer program personal statements. Please let me know if you can help me out and give me constructive criticism/editing advice because I'm around 300 words...

Hey guys, I helped last year editing/reviewing people's personal statements, and I'm back here to do it again! This summer I'll be starting my first quarter as a 2nd year dental student, so I've gotten some more dental school experience under my belt as well as closer relationships with some...

Hello everyone! With the 2018 AMCAS application opening soon, I’m in the process of finalizing my list of medical schools. I would greatly appreciate any guidance you might be able to provide about target schools and list balance (top tier vs. mid tier). Thank you!! School: Honors Program at...

Hey lovely people, I'm in the process of crafting my personal statement and was wondering if some of you would be willing to read and provide constructive feedback on what I have so far. I jotted down everything I wanted to address and the time has come to cut back and summarize content in a...

So I'm not sure if my volunteering experience is up to standard. I was an volunteer intern at a rehab clinic for 30-40hrs per week last spring. It ended up around 600+ hours of medically related experience. I volunteered at this clinic in the past as an undergrad, and when I was required to...

Hi all Just wondering if there's anyone out there who wouldn't mind looking over my secondaries (some are pre-written) and let me know what they think and offer inputs, I'm especially anxious about them being good enough for my top choice schools. Thanks in advance!

Hello SDN, I'm applying this year and it seems like most people on here are very helpful. I am a California Resident; Asian Male. Getting a B.S. Microbiology cGPA 3.90, sGPA 3.76 (Unfortunately I couldn't balance college courses well in high school, so AMCAS put that into my science GPA as...