I would be happy to read your statement if you want another pair of eyes! I'm definitely struggling with mine... it's "done" but I feel really uncertain about it, especially the introduction. I was hoping to get people's advice!
I'm considering adding a rock climbing anecdote (my main hobby) into my introduction and explain how it reminds me of OT. Climbers work together with their partner to find the best route up a wall, that caters to the climber's strengths and weaknesses. Their belay partner offers "beta" from the ground, encouragement and suggestions for completing the route. I link it quickly to OT and then launch into my reasons for wanting to do OT. I want to stand out with a unique introduction, but I'm a little worried that an admissions committee might think it's a little too creative writing-esque. Does anyone have any thoughts or suggestions about using a little anecdote in the introduction?