Thanks for all the input. I was actually navy, not the chair force...
I will be going back full time so all my pre reqs will be completed during that time. I will certainly throw down the vet card and play it for all its worth. Thanks.
Prior Navy........ okay, I retired in 1997. A couple suggestions: When writing about yourself, be sure to have someone outside the military proofread your writing. It's horrible how much military-speak becomes a normal part of our everyday usage. For example, not many corporate or academic entities have the same concept of a "liaison" as we do/did.....
Now then- do NOT diminish what you do/did. One thing about the military in general, and the Navy is particular, is that you can be thrown into a position in which you have little real-time training or experience, and you're expected to drive that darn train and godhelpya if you screw it up (because then, you know, the terrorists win). Anyhow- if you're a good technical writer, be factual about something like this. If you're a good prose-style writer, stay factual, but add in the drama and the emotion, and don't forget the humor. Most importantly, be sure to emphasize what you did RIGHT, and how that balanced out anything you may have done less-than-right. Address your leadership quals, because you've got them, not only in formal training, but also in everyday examples in your work. I'm pretty sure you were *ahem* 'encouraged' to do volunteer work in the community, with the schools, or even rebuilding that orphanage and convent in some remote Mediterranean or Indonesian town. Don't forget about your "...years of experience working with a diverse population of internal and external customers, with varying levels of education and experience....," not to mention anything you've done as part of a task force or special multi-national group (in any form), or if you've ever been assigned overseas and had to work with local English-speakng and non-English-speaking employees, dealing with local customs and practices.
You can talk about a lot of things without revealing anything that classified or even protected, you just have to couch the language.
I wish you the best.