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I need more people to give me feedbacks on my PS and I've tried using the thread for this but no one is replying.. so I'm guessing they are busy.
If anyone is willing please let me know, I'll shoot you a pm with a link to my essay.
One thing that's giving me a hard time..
I'm passionate about music. It's shaped me to who I am and was able to intertwine this passion with medicine. BUT one of my mentor is keep telling me to take it out. This person doesn't know my passion for music and only wants me to talk about medicine. HONESTLY, if I think about it, everyone is going to write about medicine (which will probably sound similar at the end) and of course I will too, but I want to emphasize the reason why I am where I am today is greatly impacted by my passion in music and I think that's what makes me unique.
Any thoughts?
Application is coming around the corner and I'm kind of freaking out... 🙁
 
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