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Can someone please explain to me what type of format is required for the ps? I have looked at a few medical school ps and they dont seem to follow any type of format. Should I use the typical essay format (intro/thesis, supporting body, conclusion) for the pharmcas ps?
 
Can someone please explain to me what type of format is required for the ps? I have looked at a few medical school ps and they dont seem to follow any type of format. Should I use the typical essay format (intro/thesis, supporting body, conclusion) for the pharmcas ps?

I recommend reusing one of your college essays for it. Be sure to mention your interest in money and how excited you are that most pharm schools have females as the majority sex. Maybe play on the word 'sex' at that point and tell them you're lookin' to put away a serious number of "bitches."
 
Can someone please explain to me what type of format is required for the ps? I have looked at a few medical school ps and they dont seem to follow any type of format. Should I use the typical essay format (intro/thesis, supporting body, conclusion) for the pharmcas ps?

Intro include: why you want to be a pharmcist, what motivate you, ...to catch their attention
body: tell them what unique about you, your work, exp, volunteer, academic diffculty, your achievements, educational background, etc.
Conclusion: 2-3 sentences.
the body can be broken down into paragraphs to make it easy for them to follow and remember your PS because they have been reading many. i know it is just one page, but you can arrange each topic and combine closely related ones. Or you can pick a few topics and go into detail. because they want to see a complete thought/idea rather than you have a lil bit of everthing, but you have enough space to support topics. (PS specialists have recommend me this). it's all up to you to make up your own style.

That's what i think because a typical essay format might take more than one page.
Hope that help
 
Thanks so much pdng!!
 
What would be helpful is if someone could post an example personal statement. I understand what format to use but I have a hard time getting over the hurdle of the first sentence about who I am and exactly why I want to be a pharmacist without sound contrite?
Any suggestions
 
An example personal statement, are you joking?

I don't understand why people are looking for a personal statement template. Be original and creative. It's called a PERSONAL statement not a "here's an essay about me that I organized based off a template from an internet site that a stranger posted" statement.

FYI: if you model your statement just like everybody else, your readers are going to be bored as f***. Be memorable.
 
What would be helpful is if someone could post an example personal statement. I understand what format to use but I have a hard time getting over the hurdle of the first sentence about who I am and exactly why I want to be a pharmacist without sound contrite?
Any suggestions

- first brainstorm it
- pick topics that you think you are outstanding/or something unique about you..and those have to answer questions: why you wanna be a pharmacist, educational bakground, exp, ...finally why they should accept you,
- start to write rough draft
- let someone edit (english teacher would be perfect because they give you ideas to organize your PS)
- revise
- edit
- revise, on and on
by the time you keep doing this process, Helpers will help you to develop your own style for PS.
I would recommend to have different teachers/ PS specialist/or anyone to edit yours. Don't go to the same one
Hope that help
 
What would be helpful is if someone could post an example personal statement. I understand what format to use but I have a hard time getting over the hurdle of the first sentence about who I am and exactly why I want to be a pharmacist without sound contrite?
Any suggestions

As a doctor - you will be expected to handle difficult situations - many of which do not have a "form" to follow. An excellent example occurred when preparing for our final year of pharmacy school.

A student asked "How are we supposed to manage moving around every six weeks for rotations?" One of our professors replied - "You want to be a doctor? You should be able to figure this one out on your own."

Writing a PS will be one of your lesser challenges of the next few years. Embrace it, do your research, and you will figure it out. Examples are not posted because it encourages people to simply copy the norm. We don't want to see the norm, we want to learn a bit about you - The PS is a "personal" statement, and it must reflect you and your passion.
 
What would be helpful is if someone could post an example personal statement. I understand what format to use but I have a hard time getting over the hurdle of the first sentence about who I am and exactly why I want to be a pharmacist without sound contrite?
Any suggestions

Here's an example:
I earned a Bachelors degree in Biochemistry, but after a summer internship with GE Appliances during my junior year, I became a full-time employee as an Information Management Leadership Program member (IMLP). I originally wanted to pursue a healthcare career, although I hadn’t considered pharmacy at the time. Friends and classmates, themselves on healthcare career tracks, were baffled by my decision. I was apprehensive, to be sure, but my analytical mind was drawn to I/T’s technical challenges.

Hindsight is 20/20. Without a single business course under my belt, I joined Corporate America and had no idea what I was in for – it gave new meaning to leaving one’s “comfort zone!” Seven years later, and I’m still convinced it was one of the best moves I’ve made, even if the reasons why have changed. When I joined GE, I was an I/T “techie,” but the IMLP program’s focus on the business side of I/T gradually converted me. Over time I sought to become more well-rounded and balance out my skill sets by moving into a project leadership role, and eventually went back to school for a business degree.

Even after seven years, though, I’m drawn to healthcare. While I enjoy I/T and project leadership, they’re not my calling. After completing an MBA degree and re-assessing my professional goals, I began searching for the “perfect career.” The perfect career for me applies my skills in science and business to fulfill a need in the community, involves continual learning, and has some exposure to technology.
My time with GE has been valuable to my professional growth, developing three skill sets beneficial in any healthcare field: communication, problem-solving/critical thinking, and ability to work under pressure.

Communication skills have been the most challenging to develop for me personally; fortunately, a steady stream of project reviews, meetings, phone calls, and emails provides plenty of practice. I’m detail-oriented and a perfectionist. The upside is that I meet my commitments and deliver them with quality. My challenge is to be brief and concise, capturing the essence of the tree without painting each leaf. Knowing the audience is another key to effective communication. No two patients are alike; their counseling needs vary with personality, age, and background. Counseling according to individual needs builds trust and improves dosing compliance. Similarly, establishing rapport with other healthcare professionals yields better therapy decisions. In either event, the patient ultimately benefits.

Pharmacists possess a wealth of pharmaceutical knowledge, and must collect and analyze relevant data to use it effectively. With an introspective and deep-thinking personality, problem solving and critical thinking historically have been my strongest suits, powerful assets in school and workplace. The ability to interpret statistical information also aids analysis and evaluation of data, and is essential for a drug information specialist, one of the clinical areas I’d like to explore. I am Greenbelt certified in Six Sigma, GE’s statistics-based quality project implementation and problem-solving methodology, giving me practical statistics experience.
Pharmacists in hospital settings work under pressure; I frequently witness it in the inpatient pharmacy where I volunteer. From my own personal experience balancing project and support responsibilities, after acclimating to the work environment, I regularly manage multiple priorities and work well under pressure, even thriving on it to some extent.

I’ve taken a longer path arriving at my decision to apply to pharmacy school, using the time for maturation and self-discovery. I believe my education, strengths, motivation, and skills developed in my current career will enable me to make a positive contribution to the pharmacy profession and the health of those I serve. In return, as an expanding field offering a wide range of specialties and work environments, pharmacy would allow me the opportunity to fulfill my career goals. I’m eager to make pharmacy a win-win situation!



 
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Here's an example:
I earned a Bachelors degree in Biochemistry, but after a summer internship with GE Appliances during my junior year, I became a full-time employee as an Information Management Leadership Program member (IMLP). I originally wanted to pursue a healthcare career, although I hadn’t considered pharmacy at the time. Friends and classmates, themselves on healthcare career tracks, were baffled by my decision. I was apprehensive, to be sure, but my analytical mind was drawn to I/T’s technical challenges.

Hindsight is 20/20. Without a single business course under my belt, I joined Corporate America and had no idea what I was in for – it gave new meaning to leaving one’s “comfort zone!” Seven years later, and I’m still convinced it was one of the best moves I’ve made, even if the reasons why have changed. When I joined GE, I was an I/T “techie,” but the IMLP program’s focus on the business side of I/T gradually converted me. Over time I sought to become more well-rounded and balance out my skill sets by moving into a project leadership role, and eventually went back to school for a business degree.

Even after seven years, though, I’m drawn to healthcare. While I enjoy I/T and project leadership, they’re not my calling. After completing an MBA degree and re-assessing my professional goals, I began searching for the “perfect career.” The perfect career for me applies my skills in science and business to fulfill a need in the community, involves continual learning, and has some exposure to technology.
My time with GE has been valuable to my professional growth, developing three skill sets beneficial in any healthcare field: communication, problem-solving/critical thinking, and ability to work under pressure.

Communication skills have been the most challenging to develop for me personally; fortunately, a steady stream of project reviews, meetings, phone calls, and emails provides plenty of practice. I’m detail-oriented and a perfectionist. The upside is that I meet my commitments and deliver them with quality. My challenge is to be brief and concise, capturing the essence of the tree without painting each leaf. Knowing the audience is another key to effective communication. No two patients are alike; their counseling needs vary with personality, age, and background. Counseling according to individual needs builds trust and improves dosing compliance. Similarly, establishing rapport with other healthcare professionals yields better therapy decisions. In either event, the patient ultimately benefits.

Pharmacists possess a wealth of pharmaceutical knowledge, and must collect and analyze relevant data to use it effectively. With an introspective and deep-thinking personality, problem solving and critical thinking historically have been my strongest suits, powerful assets in school and workplace. The ability to interpret statistical information also aids analysis and evaluation of data, and is essential for a drug information specialist, one of the clinical areas I’d like to explore. I am Greenbelt certified in Six Sigma, GE’s statistics-based quality project implementation and problem-solving methodology, giving me practical statistics experience.
Pharmacists in hospital settings work under pressure; I frequently witness it in the inpatient pharmacy where I volunteer. From my own personal experience balancing project and support responsibilities, after acclimating to the work environment, I regularly manage multiple priorities and work well under pressure, even thriving on it to some extent.

I’ve taken a longer path arriving at my decision to apply to pharmacy school, using the time for maturation and self-discovery. I believe my education, strengths, motivation, and skills developed in my current career will enable me to make a positive contribution to the pharmacy profession and the health of those I serve. In return, as an expanding field offering a wide range of specialties and work environments, pharmacy would allow me the opportunity to fulfill my career goals. I’m eager to make pharmacy a win-win situation!




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As a doctor - you will be expected to handle difficult situations - many of which do not have a "form" to follow. An excellent example occurred when preparing for our final year of pharmacy school.

A student asked "How are we supposed to manage moving around every six weeks for rotations?" One of our professors replied - "You want to be a doctor? You should be able to figure this one out on your own."

Writing a PS will be one of your lesser challenges of the next few years. Embrace it, do your research, and you will figure it out. Examples are not posted because it encourages people to simply copy the norm. We don't want to see the norm, we want to learn a bit about you - The PS is a "personal" statement, and it must reflect you and your passion.
should i put something abt i am an active member of American Red Cross or not, but actually it does not relate to pharmacy in Personal Statement, i already put it in my extracurricular activity
 
Can someone please explain to me what type of format is required for the ps? I have looked at a few medical school ps and they dont seem to follow any type of format. Should I use the typical essay format (intro/thesis, supporting body, conclusion) for the pharmcas ps?

Just make sure your ps flows and logically makes sense when reading it.. there really is no format, except for the fact that when u read it, it should tell a good Damn story.
 
Just make sure your ps flows and logically makes sense when reading it.. there really is no format, except for the fact that when u read it, it should tell a good Damn story.

sorry to nitpick, is it damn good story?
 
Here's an example:
I earned a Bachelors degree in Biochemistry, but after a summer internship with GE Appliances during my junior year, I became a full-time employee as an Information Management Leadership Program member (IMLP). I originally wanted to pursue a healthcare career, although I hadn’t considered pharmacy at the time. Friends and classmates, themselves on healthcare career tracks, were baffled by my decision. I was apprehensive, to be sure, but my analytical mind was drawn to I/T’s technical challenges.

Hindsight is 20/20. Without a single business course under my belt, I joined Corporate America and had no idea what I was in for – it gave new meaning to leaving one’s “comfort zone!” Seven years later, and I’m still convinced it was one of the best moves I’ve made, even if the reasons why have changed. When I joined GE, I was an I/T “techie,” but the IMLP program’s focus on the business side of I/T gradually converted me. Over time I sought to become more well-rounded and balance out my skill sets by moving into a project leadership role, and eventually went back to school for a business degree.

Even after seven years, though, I’m drawn to healthcare. While I enjoy I/T and project leadership, they’re not my calling. After completing an MBA degree and re-assessing my professional goals, I began searching for the “perfect career.” The perfect career for me applies my skills in science and business to fulfill a need in the community, involves continual learning, and has some exposure to technology.
My time with GE has been valuable to my professional growth, developing three skill sets beneficial in any healthcare field: communication, problem-solving/critical thinking, and ability to work under pressure.

Communication skills have been the most challenging to develop for me personally; fortunately, a steady stream of project reviews, meetings, phone calls, and emails provides plenty of practice. I’m detail-oriented and a perfectionist. The upside is that I meet my commitments and deliver them with quality. My challenge is to be brief and concise, capturing the essence of the tree without painting each leaf. Knowing the audience is another key to effective communication. No two patients are alike; their counseling needs vary with personality, age, and background. Counseling according to individual needs builds trust and improves dosing compliance. Similarly, establishing rapport with other healthcare professionals yields better therapy decisions. In either event, the patient ultimately benefits.

Pharmacists possess a wealth of pharmaceutical knowledge, and must collect and analyze relevant data to use it effectively. With an introspective and deep-thinking personality, problem solving and critical thinking historically have been my strongest suits, powerful assets in school and workplace. The ability to interpret statistical information also aids analysis and evaluation of data, and is essential for a drug information specialist, one of the clinical areas I’d like to explore. I am Greenbelt certified in Six Sigma, GE’s statistics-based quality project implementation and problem-solving methodology, giving me practical statistics experience.
Pharmacists in hospital settings work under pressure; I frequently witness it in the inpatient pharmacy where I volunteer. From my own personal experience balancing project and support responsibilities, after acclimating to the work environment, I regularly manage multiple priorities and work well under pressure, even thriving on it to some extent.

I’ve taken a longer path arriving at my decision to apply to pharmacy school, using the time for maturation and self-discovery. I believe my education, strengths, motivation, and skills developed in my current career will enable me to make a positive contribution to the pharmacy profession and the health of those I serve. In return, as an expanding field offering a wide range of specialties and work environments, pharmacy would allow me the opportunity to fulfill my career goals. I’m eager to make pharmacy a win-win situation!





ok everybody let's just copy and paste this ps for our own stories,... jk:laugh:
 
ok everybody let's just copy and paste this ps for our own stories,... jk:laugh:


ouu the temptation...j/k

thanks for the example girmaxdomino
 
An example personal statement, are you joking?

I don't understand why people are looking for a personal statement template. Be original and creative. It's called a PERSONAL statement not a "here's an essay about me that I organized based off a template from an internet site that a stranger posted" statement.

FYI: if you model your statement just like everybody else, your readers are going to be bored as f***. Be memorable.
No I wasn't joking. I just didn't want to deviate from the general format. I've never had to write one. Any essays I have had to write for college (in class and admissions) had a general topic.
I've never applied to pharmacy school so forgive me for needing clarification. 🙄
There's no need to be rude about it.
 
Here's an example:
I earned a Bachelors degree in Biochemistry, but after a summer internship with GE Appliances during my junior year, I became a full-time employee as an Information Management Leadership Program member (IMLP). I originally wanted to pursue a healthcare career, although I hadn’t considered pharmacy at the time. Friends and classmates, themselves on healthcare career tracks, were baffled by my decision. I was apprehensive, to be sure, but my analytical mind was drawn to I/T’s technical challenges.

Hindsight is 20/20. Without a single business course under my belt, I joined Corporate America and had no idea what I was in for – it gave new meaning to leaving one’s “comfort zone!” Seven years later, and I’m still convinced it was one of the best moves I’ve made, even if the reasons why have changed. When I joined GE, I was an I/T “techie,” but the IMLP program’s focus on the business side of I/T gradually converted me. Over time I sought to become more well-rounded and balance out my skill sets by moving into a project leadership role, and eventually went back to school for a business degree.

Even after seven years, though, I’m drawn to healthcare. While I enjoy I/T and project leadership, they’re not my calling. After completing an MBA degree and re-assessing my professional goals, I began searching for the “perfect career.” The perfect career for me applies my skills in science and business to fulfill a need in the community, involves continual learning, and has some exposure to technology.
My time with GE has been valuable to my professional growth, developing three skill sets beneficial in any healthcare field: communication, problem-solving/critical thinking, and ability to work under pressure.

Communication skills have been the most challenging to develop for me personally; fortunately, a steady stream of project reviews, meetings, phone calls, and emails provides plenty of practice. I’m detail-oriented and a perfectionist. The upside is that I meet my commitments and deliver them with quality. My challenge is to be brief and concise, capturing the essence of the tree without painting each leaf. Knowing the audience is another key to effective communication. No two patients are alike; their counseling needs vary with personality, age, and background. Counseling according to individual needs builds trust and improves dosing compliance. Similarly, establishing rapport with other healthcare professionals yields better therapy decisions. In either event, the patient ultimately benefits.

Pharmacists possess a wealth of pharmaceutical knowledge, and must collect and analyze relevant data to use it effectively. With an introspective and deep-thinking personality, problem solving and critical thinking historically have been my strongest suits, powerful assets in school and workplace. The ability to interpret statistical information also aids analysis and evaluation of data, and is essential for a drug information specialist, one of the clinical areas I’d like to explore. I am Greenbelt certified in Six Sigma, GE’s statistics-based quality project implementation and problem-solving methodology, giving me practical statistics experience.
Pharmacists in hospital settings work under pressure; I frequently witness it in the inpatient pharmacy where I volunteer. From my own personal experience balancing project and support responsibilities, after acclimating to the work environment, I regularly manage multiple priorities and work well under pressure, even thriving on it to some extent.

I’ve taken a longer path arriving at my decision to apply to pharmacy school, using the time for maturation and self-discovery. I believe my education, strengths, motivation, and skills developed in my current career will enable me to make a positive contribution to the pharmacy profession and the health of those I serve. In return, as an expanding field offering a wide range of specialties and work environments, pharmacy would allow me the opportunity to fulfill my career goals. I’m eager to make pharmacy a win-win situation!



Oh Now I get it! lol Thank you for showing me what it looks like. Now I know what to do- I appreciate your help instead of criticizing a person for asking an honest question.
 
Oh Now I get it! lol Thank you for showing me what it looks like. Now I know what to do- I appreciate your help instead of criticizing a person for asking an honest question.

No problem! I'm here to help unlike some people who are here just to criticize. Best of luck!
 
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ok everybody let's just copy and paste this ps for our own stories,... jk:laugh:

I think this is a good idea. Be sure to post if they ask you in an interview to describe Six Sigma in a little more detail. I like the stories where people have to react under pressure.
 
ok everybody let's just copy and paste this ps for our own stories,... jk:laugh:

Lol. Copy and paste away! Just make sure you know it well enough that you can explain everything in case they ask you any questions from it! 😀
 
"In our next presidential election, an actor who reads his Bible would almost certainly defeat a rocket scientist who does not."-Sam Harris

I'm a big fan of Sam Harris, but he's almost 30 years behind on this one.

I'm sure most of us weren't around in 1980 when a biblethumping not too bright mediocre actor called Ronald Reagan trounced Jimmy Carter, an accomplished statesman and war veteran with an IQ of 176.
 
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