I would replace my name with
@Goro haha!
What kind of prestigious award are we talking about for research? University-based? System based? Goldwater/National?
Include Rush, Loyola, Creighton due to your service hours. Was the civic engagement with underrepresented groups?
My concern would be that you are OOS for Baylor and UVA which also have higher median MCAT for OOS groups (519/520)
Also add MCW, Jefferson