Secondary Essays examples?

[Thunder Thighs]

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Hey would anyone who's been accepted be willing to share an example or two of their secondary essays (privately of course)? Or if you know of any good examples out there? A lot of the common ones are on challenges and failures or how you'd be diversifying the class so an example of those would be super helpful.

 

[Thunder Thighs]

If no one wants to share since they're pretty personal can someone give an idea of how formal vs familiar to write these? My writing tends to be very casual/simple... I'm just wondering about whether writing style is judged as much or mainly just the content.