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How long should update letters be? I would appreciate opinions on whether they should be as short as possible to save time for the reader, or more descriptive to describe the significance of the update and its relevance to the school.
For example, if one were writing about a recent publication . . .
To the point: "Dear Man's Greatest Medical School, I am writing to inform you that a manuscript has been accepted for publication with my name on it. Here is the citation. Thank you for your consideration."
Descriptive: "Dear Man's Greatest Medical School, I am writing to you because I am extremely interested in being educated at your program. I am excited to tell you that some of my current group's work has been published, and here is the citation. The project was all about this really cool thing, and I am grateful that I had the chance to make this awesome contribution. Doing all of this research makes me think about how great it would be to be a student at your school and how wonderful it would be to be mentored by one of your amazing faculty members . . . (etc.)"
What does everyone think?
For example, if one were writing about a recent publication . . .
To the point: "Dear Man's Greatest Medical School, I am writing to inform you that a manuscript has been accepted for publication with my name on it. Here is the citation. Thank you for your consideration."
Descriptive: "Dear Man's Greatest Medical School, I am writing to you because I am extremely interested in being educated at your program. I am excited to tell you that some of my current group's work has been published, and here is the citation. The project was all about this really cool thing, and I am grateful that I had the chance to make this awesome contribution. Doing all of this research makes me think about how great it would be to be a student at your school and how wonderful it would be to be mentored by one of your amazing faculty members . . . (etc.)"
What does everyone think?