Can someone please look over my work/activities section for overall material (appropriate/inappropriate, too little written/too much written), the flow of the material, grammar, sentence structure, etc? I am planning on submitting within the next week or 2 maximum as it is already August, so I am looking for someone who can provide me with steadfast and thorough feedback.
P.S. I am not done with describing all of the activities, so I can send you what I have so far.
Please let me know ASAP. Thank you!