Work/Activities List Edit?

[deleted854547]

Could someone take a look at my work/activities list for grammar, sentence structure, and overall clarity? I'd really appreciate it!

 

[Wingardium Leviosa]

I'd be happy to take a look if you'd like to trade. I'm not quite done yet but I can definitely look at yours whenever--feel free to pm me!

 

[enchantediris]

I'll definitely trade with you as well! 🙂

 

[pms_testosterone]

OK!

 

[Neuro244]

Can someone please look over my work/activities section for overall material (appropriate/inappropriate, too little written/too much written), the flow of the material, grammar, sentence structure, etc? I am planning on submitting within the next week or 2 maximum as it is already August, so I am looking for someone who can provide me with steadfast and thorough feedback.

P.S. I am not done with describing all of the activities, so I can send you what I have so far.

Please let me know ASAP. Thank you!

 

[Neuro244]

Can someone please look over my work/activities section for overall material (appropriate/inappropriate, too little written/too much written), the flow of the material, grammar, sentence structure, etc? I appreciate any feedback and your time! I am looking to finish this section ASAP and need one more person to go through it and give me all their comments and feedback. Thank you!

 

[pms_testosterone]

@AquaticSunrise13 , I can. You can send them in a PM.
If you have time, could you look over mine? If not, no worries.

 

[Kingsmen2018]

ill take a peek