Work and Activities Review-Applying this cycle

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infinitestars

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Hello! I was wondering if anyone has the time to give me feedback on my work and activities. I am a terrible writer, I need feedback on if did enough "showing" and not "telling." I have a google doc.

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Hello! I was wondering if anyone has the time to give me feedback on my work and activities. I am a terrible writer, I need feedback on if did enough "showing" and not "telling." I have a google doc.
Watch this space
 
Hello! I was wondering if anyone has the time to give me feedback on my work and activities. I am a terrible writer, I need feedback on if did enough "showing" and not "telling." I have a google doc.
What timeline are you needing it by? Might take a couple more drafts & you probably have a submission date you’re aiming for so that’s why I ask. I can def help tho, just might take a bit
 
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What timeline are you needing it by? Might take a couple more drafts & you probably have a submission date you’re aiming for so that’s why I ask. I can def help tho, just might take a bit
may 28 im trying to submit!
 
may 28 im trying to submit!
I got so many requests from ppl after they saw my post but I'll prioritize them by you first & then anyone who reached out to me after. So feel free to send it over - it just might take some time
 
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