Would anyone be willing to read my disadvantaged essay?

[cometx3]

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I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it over PM, because honestly it kind of has a lot of stuff in it that I don't think i'd feel comfortable showing to people I know IRL. The thing I am struggling with is how much detail I should get into or whether I should apply as disadvantaged at all. Thanks.

 

[greaterwing]

I also wrote a disadvantaged essay. You can PM and I can take a look.

 

[greaterwing]

This also has some good info: *Does this count as disadvantaged status?*