I am still unclear as to how much writing I should target for each of my experiences. I have a well-thought out CV that has been revised numerous times and it very good in my opinion. I am wondering whether I can just use that to enter the descriptions for the different experiences/activities that I have been involved with. I understand that for my most meaningful I will need to provide the reasons why and include more details but I am more concerned with just the description of my activities. I have posted an example of one activity I have done and its description below.
Residence Assistant
· Representative for the Thomas residence hall and held responsibilities such as promoting activities & events for students living on-campus
· Attended weekly meetings involving planning of events and developing proposals regarding fundraising and sponsorship for planned activities
Is this a sufficient description or should I expand? My advisor said to try to be concise and short as adcoms will be looking at thousands of applications.
Residence Assistant
· Representative for the Thomas residence hall and held responsibilities such as promoting activities & events for students living on-campus
· Attended weekly meetings involving planning of events and developing proposals regarding fundraising and sponsorship for planned activities
Is this a sufficient description or should I expand? My advisor said to try to be concise and short as adcoms will be looking at thousands of applications.