Anyone willing to review my challenge essay?

[lexington251]

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I'm not sure if I've articulated my challenge sufficiently, and would love to get some second opinions!

 

[Dr. Stalker]

please inbox me! Happy to edit it.

 

[AttemptingScholar]

I'm not at the application stage so my advice will be limited, but I can read for tone, word choice, and tell you what I learned about you from it!

 

[kitkat13]

I can also look! 🙂

 

[BachDoc]

Are any of you willing to read my diversity essay? Just using this thread instead of starting a new one.

 

[AttemptingScholar]

@BachDoc
I'm not at the application stage so my advice will be limited, but I can read for tone, word choice, and tell you what I learned about you from it!