Can you find a better adversity essay than this one?

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I think I really speak from the soul in this particular piece of mine.

Arriving home one night at four in the morning, I found myself locked outside of my house but inside my garage. This particular night, although I had entered the garage using a door code, I turned the doorknob to the inside of the house and found the door locked. As this was the usual state of the locking mechanism, I wasn’t worried. However, after fumbling in the dark under the shoe rack for over a minute, I came to the conclusion that because the door was locked and the key was missing, I needed to deviate from my usual routine. I sat down on the cold concrete and vividly recalled past memories of when I had been in this same situation. When I was in middle school, I would gently remove the metal plate in front of the cat door, stick my arm through the hole, and reach blindly for the knob in the hopes of reaching the handle from the inside. Unfortunately, after getting only as far as my upper bicep, I realized that at my current state of 6’2” and 210 pounds, my flexibility and muscularity had moved in opposite directions. I then considered climbing into the backyard over the side gate to attempt entry through the backdoor. However, relying upon the critical thinking and analytical skills I had developed in college, I balanced the low percentage of the back door being unlocked and the probability that a neighbor might call the police on me and decided against this plan of action. Changing tactics, I called upon my support system of friends to encourage me through these trying times. My tenure in research informed me that as one increases the number of samples or subjects, the closer to truth one reaches. As such, I called numerous friends in order to take an average of their solutions to this problem. The advice they gave me was universally applicable, and not only specific to situations where one is locked out from shelter. Further, my friends were able to provide me with the moral support I needed. Their advice summed to the following: find something warm to sleep on until morning. Making the best of a tragic situation, I grabbed a dusty blanket that hadn’t been used in almost a decade. My parents found me on a pile of dirty laundry the next morning. As I learned through this trial and tribulation of mine, time heals all wounds.
 
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you had many friends awake at 4am..seems odd? Sorry, but that was just my first reaction, and thus, perhaps, could be ADCOMs too.

Edit: sorry if I am falling into some sort of trap where this is satire; it's odd for people to post their essays, your framing of it in speaking from the soul, and this story just seems like you are being a smart aleck

Nice.
 
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err.... see if you can come up with a different example
 
I totally thought that was an essay about an abusive parent locking you out of the house, until I got to the end. I would find something else to write about...
 
You guys joke around but if I was on an adcom and I read this I would give an II immediately
 
can u apply to a Caribbean school using these types of essays and see if u getII or accepted plz
 
You clearly put some time into this, so I'll give it a generous 2/10
 
Thanks for your input y'all. Based on the poll, it appears I won't be getting in anywhere worthwhile (my top-choice school is Stewarts), so I've decided to follow my true life-long passion. I just bought my one way ticket to Montana and I've nailed hooves into the bottom of my feet and my hands. Soon I'll be galloping in wide open plains with my fellow equine brethren.
 
I can't believe you're not applying to Princeton-Plainsboro. Such an underrated school, should easily to Harvard/Stanford/UCSF.
 
Thanks for your input y'all. Based on the poll, it appears I won't be getting in anywhere worthwhile (my top-choice school is Stewarts), so I've decided to follow my true life-long passion. I just bought my one way ticket to Montana and I've nailed hooves into the bottom of my feet and my hands. Soon I'll be galloping in wide open plains with my fellow equine brethren.

You should also look into Scott-Harman Institute for Technology - School of Medicine 😉
 
"My tenure in research informed me that as one increases the number of samples or subjects, the closer to truth one reaches. "

You're a modern-day Confucius/Buddha hybrid.
Thanks for the laughs.
 
Unfortunately, after getting only as far as my upper bicep, I realized that at my current state of 6’2” and 210 pounds, my flexibility and muscularity had moved in opposite directions.

Loll...I like that OP is poking fun of the humble-braggers here.
 
Loll...I like that OP is poking fun of the humble-braggers here.
Pfffttt ya'll be forgettin' that 6-1, 210 is way above the NIH's recommended BMI bro
 
I'm hurt md-2020 🙁. My waist size is 32 and I gym upwards of 4 times a week.
You gym? But do you sportz often enough?

Lol on a slightly more serious note, waist size = 32 is probably more like 180ish pounds (assuming 6-1 height), no?
 
This reminds me in some way of a essay on a coping with adversity essay that gave a blow by blow account of avoiding an accident after being cut off in traffic. The coping mechanism included speaking to the passengers, swerving and applying the brake. It took 10 times longer to read the essay than it did to cope with this near-tragedy.

So, I'm ready to consider almost anything as a serious response to a prompt. Satire in this environment is very, very difficult.
 
So, I'm ready to consider almost anything as a serious response to a prompt. Satire in this environment is very, very difficult.

What are some adversities that often yield successful essays?
 
I'm less interested in the adversity than I am in how you dealt with it. Do you know when to let go of things you cannot change rather than over-reacting? (e.g. your grandmother has a stroke. You are 700 miles away. Can you pick up your books and prepare for an exam or are you unhinged by the thought that your aged grandmother may die soon to the point where you are tied to social media looking for more up-dates from family?) Did you have healthy coping skills? Do you take responsibility yet know when to ask for help? Do you know your limits and take time to recover from a major situation? Do you bounce back?
 
I'm less interested in the adversity than I am in how you dealt with it. Do you know when to let go of things you cannot change rather than over-reacting? (e.g. your grandmother has a stroke. You are 700 miles away. Can you pick up your books and prepare for an exam or are you unhinged by the thought that your aged grandmother may die soon to the point where you are tied to social media looking for more up-dates from family?) Did you have healthy coping skills? Do you take responsibility yet know when to ask for help? Do you know your limits and take time to recover from a major situation? Do you bounce back?

Came to this thread for a laugh, left needing to rewrite my essays.
 
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