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I was wondering if I could get some opinions here. I've been working on my personal statement since September, and while I have all the points I want down, it's still not really personal. It's rather dry actually, as I am horrible when it comes to talking about myself.
Okay, getting to my point: I was wondering if it's a good thing to use a catchy idea in the first few sentences. Something like: Chloe knows how use a computer. Chloe knows how to get into any trash can. Chloe can drive my car. Chloe is my five pound chihuahua and she should be in Mensa. People say dogs emulate their owners. I am not that arrogant to think I am a genius, but I've followed an enlightening path to psychology.
I'm trying to add some of my personality to my statement. My twin sister thought this was a great idea, but I wanted to know what people in the field actually thought.
and BTW: I plan on ending the statement with something like : After I graduate with my Clinical PhD, I plan to test for Mensa. After receiving the honor, Chloe would officially be Mensa by proxy.
Okay, getting to my point: I was wondering if it's a good thing to use a catchy idea in the first few sentences. Something like: Chloe knows how use a computer. Chloe knows how to get into any trash can. Chloe can drive my car. Chloe is my five pound chihuahua and she should be in Mensa. People say dogs emulate their owners. I am not that arrogant to think I am a genius, but I've followed an enlightening path to psychology.
I'm trying to add some of my personality to my statement. My twin sister thought this was a great idea, but I wanted to know what people in the field actually thought.
and BTW: I plan on ending the statement with something like : After I graduate with my Clinical PhD, I plan to test for Mensa. After receiving the honor, Chloe would officially be Mensa by proxy.