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Was hoping if someone could give me insight on how my disadvantaged status essay sounds...
I grew up in a family that consisted of an alcoholic father and physically abusive mother. My father was a sales man and my mother was a high school drop out who always had a hard time finding work. Due to the nature of my father's career, there were always fluctuations in our financial situation, most of the time for the worse. After years of fighting, my mother decided to leave my family and file for divorce when I was sixteen. My father became depressed and lost his job. When I was eighteen, my house foreclosed and I was left homeless for two weeks while attending college. Luckily, my high school lacrosse coach allowed me to reside in his house until I was able to find a place of my own.
After living with my fiancé for several years, we decided to start a family. I also decided that I needed a career suited to properly provide for my family. While re-matriculating, I was required to work full time to pay rent and other financial obligations. Because of this, I missed out on many research and volunteering opportunities that I would have loved to participate in. I've had my fair share of hardships that made me what I am today; a resilient, hard working father with a dream of becoming a doctor.
I grew up in a family that consisted of an alcoholic father and physically abusive mother. My father was a sales man and my mother was a high school drop out who always had a hard time finding work. Due to the nature of my father's career, there were always fluctuations in our financial situation, most of the time for the worse. After years of fighting, my mother decided to leave my family and file for divorce when I was sixteen. My father became depressed and lost his job. When I was eighteen, my house foreclosed and I was left homeless for two weeks while attending college. Luckily, my high school lacrosse coach allowed me to reside in his house until I was able to find a place of my own.
After living with my fiancé for several years, we decided to start a family. I also decided that I needed a career suited to properly provide for my family. While re-matriculating, I was required to work full time to pay rent and other financial obligations. Because of this, I missed out on many research and volunteering opportunities that I would have loved to participate in. I've had my fair share of hardships that made me what I am today; a resilient, hard working father with a dream of becoming a doctor.