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Im having some trouble choosing my topic for the diversity essay... Which of the following would be the best?
1. Initially I struggled in school when I moved from South Korea to US. Had a mentor who significantly helped me adjust, so I also became passionate in tutoring/mentoring immigrant kids and want to continue that in med school. Part of the reason why I want to go into academic medicine. (maybe too cliche?)
2. Used to live with doctor parents in Korea and was privileged to never have a gap in my medical care. After moving to the US to live with my relatives as a teenager, I experienced first-hand having to delay medical care that led to a serious health issue for my brother. Working in a free clinic, I saw that many other immigrants also deal with this and want to become an advocate for immigrants in healthcare. (Kinda started off with my brotherās illness being a spark in my PS so might be repetitive)
3. Used to go to a boarding arts school in South Korea to become a professional flutist. The school had a toxic competitive culture, such as publicly ranking students after each monthly audition and verbally abusing those of us who ranked low. That toxic culture made me lose any purpose for music. Then, in college, I volunteered at a dementia facility playing music for seniors. Played the piano (Which I had no experience in) in a quartet with other volunteers and realized that music can be for harmony and healing rather than competition. Using my experience, want to foster collaborative, social atmosphere among students by learning to play new instruments together and also volunteering to play for local clinics.
1. Initially I struggled in school when I moved from South Korea to US. Had a mentor who significantly helped me adjust, so I also became passionate in tutoring/mentoring immigrant kids and want to continue that in med school. Part of the reason why I want to go into academic medicine. (maybe too cliche?)
2. Used to live with doctor parents in Korea and was privileged to never have a gap in my medical care. After moving to the US to live with my relatives as a teenager, I experienced first-hand having to delay medical care that led to a serious health issue for my brother. Working in a free clinic, I saw that many other immigrants also deal with this and want to become an advocate for immigrants in healthcare. (Kinda started off with my brotherās illness being a spark in my PS so might be repetitive)
3. Used to go to a boarding arts school in South Korea to become a professional flutist. The school had a toxic competitive culture, such as publicly ranking students after each monthly audition and verbally abusing those of us who ranked low. That toxic culture made me lose any purpose for music. Then, in college, I volunteered at a dementia facility playing music for seniors. Played the piano (Which I had no experience in) in a quartet with other volunteers and realized that music can be for harmony and healing rather than competition. Using my experience, want to foster collaborative, social atmosphere among students by learning to play new instruments together and also volunteering to play for local clinics.