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Personal Statement Help? Applying to USUHS

Incognito32

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Dec 21, 2016
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Hello all,

I finished a draft of my PS and would love some feedback on it. It feels disorganized and I'm not sure if it's entirely coherent. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

I should mention that my essay is targeted at "Why military medicine" rather than "Why medicine". I tried to tie my PS into my 3 most important activities from my work/activities section (Krav Maga, Hospital Volunteer, and Undergraduate Research).

Edit: I have already checked the Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2020-2021 (but no replies so far)
 
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