Personal Statement Help? Applying to USUHS

[Incognito32]

Hello all,

I finished a draft of my PS and would love some feedback on it. It feels disorganized and I'm not sure if it's entirely coherent. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

I should mention that my essay is targeted at "Why military medicine" rather than "Why medicine". I tried to tie my PS into my 3 most important activities from my work/activities section (Krav Maga, Hospital Volunteer, and Undergraduate Research).

Edit: I have already checked the Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2020-2021 (but no replies so far)

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[armytrainingsir]

If you're not in a huge hurry, I would be happy to look over it if you want to PM it to me. And feel free to redact anything too personal or identifying.

 

[Incognito32]

If you're not in a huge hurry, I would be happy to look over it if you want to PM it to me. And feel free to redact anything too personal or identifying.

DM'ed! My MCAT retake was delayed until late July so I have a bit of time.

 

[Matthew9Thirtyfive]

I’m finishing my first year at USUHS so went through the app process last year. Feel free to PM me.

 

[militaryPHYS]

Send it if you want more eyes on

 

[BunnyMan17]

I'm an MS4 at USUHS and would be glad to look it over for your, PM me