Attention: Admissions Committee
Thank-you for taking the time to review my application for (program, degree,etc) for the application cycle of 2008. I appreciate that difficult decisions must be made and sincerely regreat not being able to join your department in Fall 2008. Nonetheless, I am still committed to PhD studies in ---- at your institution for the following reasons: 1) Briefly say why you are qualified 2) Briefly Say why you want to pursue this degree and program & what you plan to do with it and 3) why them (Kiss their asses)?.
As such, I would be grateful if you are able to identify specific aspects of my application which were noticeably lacking, so that I can improve upon them for the next application cycle, when I plan to apply for -------
Respectfully,
reproheather