Secondaries - Critique/Help needed!

[doctorinthesky]

Hi all

Just wondering if there's anyone out there who wouldn't mind looking over my secondaries (some are pre-written) and let me know what they think and offer inputs, I'm especially anxious about them being good enough for my top choice schools.

Thanks in advance!

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[deforestasian]

PM me, I'm down to trade some secondaries to read if you're interested

 

[Gurkhali]

Sure, I'll take a look.