Use meaningful extracurriculars or experiences as a foundation; this usually works, but if you don't have meaningful extracurriculars then just talk about your background/life/diversity etc. Use specific examples of your accomplishments. Tie in the introduction and conclusion to make it flow well. Revise and edit like a madman.
Most importantly, be honest. Don't write what you think they WANT to hear, write what you actually feel.
Do you have any tips to writing a strong personal statement? I've never actually written one before and every time I tell myself I'm going to start on it, I end up staring at my screen for hours.
There are multiple aspects, however, I believe that a great or strong personal statement has an essence of
enthusiasm written all over it. Pure excitement.
Do some research on the institute you are applying to, and state certain facts about the school that attract you tremendously to it. Don't just use the same PS over and over or a generic PS. Instead modify it for each school you are applying too. I like to make the school feel like its the best and super special to me and I emphasize why I believe so.
If you have no previous research experience, then be honest! However, state how eager you are to attain that research experience, which you have been told is SO AWESOME!
Get the idea?
Enthusiasm!
There are a bunch of techniques and things you can put on the PS which make up for having low GPA or no research experience.
If anything, I like to talk more about what motivates me as opposed to previous experience.
Here is why. Talking about previous experiences sounds more show-offish and it can come out some what arrogant.
However, talking about your goals can be more exciting, I feel.
Before writing my letters with my intentions for research, I did some google searches with regards to the purpose of MD/PhD programs. Basically, I realized that these tracks of MD with research are really headed toward becoming professors, hence I state that I would one day like to educate those students who then show the same excitement for science the way I do now. Except i use fancier words and my sentences arent as awkward as in this message here.
Furthermore, I understand that some sample essays online sound like people speak about their underprivileged backgrounds. Please believe that I am severely underprivileged. I, however, find this a very tacky technique and over used and frankly, If I were an admissions persons, I would be bored to read these "oh! life has been cruel to me and my family" type of statements. There might be some really sad stories that you can talk about but I would only use it if I turned the sad story into super success. For example, I always mention that I am a High School drop out, however, I dont stay stuck on that. I quickly state my GPA and that it only took me 2 years to reach senior status at my university.
Here is another example, some years ago, a "nobody" soccer fan in England become the manager of a soccer team with out any professional experience as a manager or coach. I happened to find the letter online and used it as a template for some application. I reasoned that this guy must of written one awesome crazy letter in order to of have been given the job and he did! Im not searching the document for you, but Im sure there are many other examples out there you can find if you do your homework.
There are many things that I can talk about all day, but just do some google searches and use some of the templates online as a starting point.
Please be advised that this is just t
he way I do things and
is not precisely the proper manner in which to write personal statements.
Thats all I can think for now.
Hope it helps.. Good luck.