Would anyone be willing to give me feedback on a few secondary essays?

[Austinsapp]

I just submitted some secondaries and I am starting to second guess everything, would anyone be willing to read the question and my response and give me their honest feedback. I would really appreciate it, and I am more than willing help anyone else out in any way I can. Thank you in advance.

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[Mr.Smile12]

Learning to let go after you submit your secondary application is a difficult but necessary emotion.

 

[Jball43]

I can look over whatever you want as long as you’re planning on having more secondaries. If we review them just to give you peace of mind, we might be risking your mental health.

It’s not a bad idea to go over them to remember what you said for your upcoming interviews though but you don’t need me for that.