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That is a good idea. I should take it to HR at the hospital where I work, They do have a career thing there. They told me they wanna send their employees to med school cause the chance of them coming back and work for them is high so theyre willing to take the risk! Hm thank you!I pretty much agree with everything you said. You need to be memorable, but leave the reader wanting more. Less is more in a personal statement, because you don't want the reader to be bored at all.
I found strangers who knew nothing about me and had them read mine for feedback. I also took it to the HR department at my hospital and got their feedback on whether or not reading it would make them want to meet me.
Get as many different eyes on it as possible and take the criticism with a grain of salt. What one person loves, another will not.
Just don't be forgettable. An advisor told me if, after the first 2 sentences he wanted to keep reading, it was a success.
How's your cycle going? I hope well!