Hi all,
Here is what I am thinking about writing and I would greatly appreciate feedback. I have read on here that immigrant diversity essays are very common but I wanted to see if mine made a case to be unique.
I moved to the US when I was 7 from the middle east and did not know any English. At school it was hard for me to make friends in the beginning because I stuck out a lot and it made me resent my background at times. My perspective changed when my grandma who lived with us got sick and I saw how my mom quit her job and took care of her as it was part of our culture. I started to appreciate our culture after that point. I want to tie in some of the struggles that I saw my parents face with my grandma and learning about healthcare in the US and how I can add to the diversity of the class by explaining some of these struggles to my classmates.
Thanks in advance for taking the time to read this.
Here is what I am thinking about writing and I would greatly appreciate feedback. I have read on here that immigrant diversity essays are very common but I wanted to see if mine made a case to be unique.
I moved to the US when I was 7 from the middle east and did not know any English. At school it was hard for me to make friends in the beginning because I stuck out a lot and it made me resent my background at times. My perspective changed when my grandma who lived with us got sick and I saw how my mom quit her job and took care of her as it was part of our culture. I started to appreciate our culture after that point. I want to tie in some of the struggles that I saw my parents face with my grandma and learning about healthcare in the US and how I can add to the diversity of the class by explaining some of these struggles to my classmates.
Thanks in advance for taking the time to read this.