Please critique my personal statement

Bikini Princess

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    Hi,

    I need people to critique my personal statement. PM me if you want to, then I'll PM you the statement.

    Be as harsh as possible, and also pretend you are an adcom member reading hundreds of them.

    Thanks!! :)
     
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