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So I'm combining my shadowing experiences into one activity. However, I saw that someone on here said to do it in this way:
But I've also received editing advice from multiple people to do it this way:
"I have had the opportunity to shadow in a variety of specialties, including A, B, C. Through these experiences, I have observed a Surgery A, B, and C. I learned that BLAH BLAH BLAH. This will help me as a physician BLAH BLAH BLAH"
So which one should I do? IMO, not every experience needs to have some profound, existential meaning. And that shadowing can simply be shadowing to figure out what it's like to be a physician, and I would assume that adcoms know what shadowing entails. However, I feel like there is this huge emphasis on the transformative nature of experiences and the reflection we have because of them in our writing. Does it really matter? Am I overthinking it?
So I'm combining my shadowing experiences into one activity. However, I saw that someone on here said to do it in this way:
- 30 hours, 01/2024 - 04/2024. Dr. Spongebob, spine surgeon at the Krusty Krab. Clinic visits. *Contact listed in stuff above*
- 12 hours, 04/2023 - 05/2023. Dr. Squidward, neurosurgeon at Bikini Bottom Hospital. Surgical cases. squilliamsucks@gmail.com
- So on and so forth
But I've also received editing advice from multiple people to do it this way:
"I have had the opportunity to shadow in a variety of specialties, including A, B, C. Through these experiences, I have observed a Surgery A, B, and C. I learned that BLAH BLAH BLAH. This will help me as a physician BLAH BLAH BLAH"
So which one should I do? IMO, not every experience needs to have some profound, existential meaning. And that shadowing can simply be shadowing to figure out what it's like to be a physician, and I would assume that adcoms know what shadowing entails. However, I feel like there is this huge emphasis on the transformative nature of experiences and the reflection we have because of them in our writing. Does it really matter? Am I overthinking it?