Im still cutting it super close, was ready to submit last week then made the mistake (?) of asking my future lawyer and writer friends to take a look. They had a lot of good suggestions. All I have to do is look over/possibly edit my PS one my time and edit one schools supplemental questions due on the 15th. I can't wait to finally hit submit!
Also, I've been going back and forth on the explanation statement, maybe you guys can help me? My adviser told me to include a statement about my freshman year GPA since it was kinda low (3.2) but my cumulative is pretty nice. (3.73). So the reason why I did worse that year was because two of my family members died (grandfather and aunt). Should I say one was due to a random act of homicide? The situation surrounding her death made it quite hard on the family. And can I leave it at that or do I need to say how i learned from it blah blah blah? I mean I had other stressors that happened while in school and maintained a good GPA, but nothing as hard as that was (minor health problems for me and lots of potentially life-threatening health problems for my horse).
ETA: OR should i just say two family members of mine died and not be specific, I dont want them to think Im trying to play a sympathy card. That is not my intention at all.