Here is what I wrote the first time! The second time I wrote I emphasized that I would love to be a part of their class of 2025 and was very interested in their school since it is towards the top of my list!
To whom it may concern,
I was hoping to receive an update regarding the status of my VCOM application. I have not heard anything since September 9th, when I received an email stating that my application was complete. I know that the email I received had stated that if I was granted an interview, I could expect to be notified by phone; however, I was unsure of whether my application had been reviewed yet, as I have yet to receive any communication, via phone or email, regarding its status. As such, I have been assuming that my application has yet to be reviewed, as I know VCOM is receiving a multitude of applications and is quite busy; however, if possible, I would like to confirm my status.
Any updates that are able to be provided regarding the current status of my application would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.