I'd love to see someone one time submit an honest personal statement for something.
"Hi, I'm blah blah blah and like thousands of other veterinary students, I'm drowning in debt. I know you are receiving hundreds of applications trying to find the one that is perfect to receive your scholarship. I'm sure you're looking for that one student that writes enough BS smoke in an attempt to stand out and likely that student will win. Well, after hours of studying numerous exams and cringing at my current debt level I'm out of BS for you. So here's the honest truth: I'm a vet student and I need money. I'm probably not any more qualified for this scholarship than any of my other fellow vet students, unless this is a scholarship about honesty, in which case I'm sure my personal statement will be the most honest. I work hard, I study , I'm interested in vet med things and I'm brutally honest. Hopefully you'll consider giving me the scholarship and, if not , hopefully I gave you a good laugh and damn it felt good to write this."