Hey guys, question about the open ended prompt here. One of my friends who matriculated at Vermont recently proof read my draft and said it was a "good essay", but should talk more about why Dartmouth interests me, so it "doesn't look like I picked them out of a hat [or MSAR]". My understanding from a couple posts here was that it should just tell them something interesting about you that you don't think was on there [and doesn't necessarily relate to medicine ]...
I simply talked about my summer travels in Brooklyn, learning the art of pizza making from some of the legendary chefs, and a project building my own brick oven in the backyard to continue my passion. I also talked about diverse interactions I had...people speaking Hebrew, Russian, Italian, French, Portugese... and how cooking is both a cultural centerpiece there and in my life as well. With that I tied in moving along the east coast multiple times, and how I finally ended up in a cuisine-driven area where cooking became my way of dealing with starting over.
I didn't think they were asking for an essay explaining why you think you are specifically a match for their school. Does anyone feel differently? Should I integrate and list the things that draw me to the school? Or does what I wrote about present something interesting enough to satisfy the prompt? Opinions greatly appreciated.